So far the Guitar seem repetitive for a while : I don't feel any Great Solo but the atmosphere seem like a song of Mudwayne/Godsmack but without acoustic / or awesome guitar solo :
the song seem a bit Depressive or to express hatred with a punk guitar attitude instead of a heavy metal attitude
but it Version 1.0 who know what version 2.0 can be sometime it totally different : lot of Artist on newground after Tweaking the song for a month made the song twice better
but the rift that go at 1:30 - 1:55 make the song slightly better but right now it too dull for me to enjoy really but the lyric seem good so far but im not a lyric fan usually im more a instrument fan
i know it lack of drum / bass : I know you said it will be done soon : the lyrics : I don't actually seem to understand all of it yet : but so far listening it i find the song have potential but i'm not sure of how i could be a support to make it better
I don't hate the solo at the near ending part but should be better i hope you can improve that while i don't know how : I know how a guitar can sound as iv listen over 15,000 song featuring them but i don't know shit about how to play them
Marc2012
New song Finally il try to give a Feedback once i have a contrect idea of it...