did you get to marry your skyrim babe?
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If you're referring to Camilla from my little story in the Skyrim thread, no, I didn't, no matter what I did, she would never show up, and I'd hit wait and find out I somehow missed my wedding... and find Lydia dead in the door way.
... So I married Ysolda from whiterun instead.
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Lose the fake drums or get better samples
Work on crispness of palm muting when playing with the bass drum like you did in the second half
Too much sweep echo in the beginning - a few parts where it sounds sloppy
Pick slide needs to be smoother with no hesitation
Distortion overall feels a bit high and too muddy in some areas.
Maybe adding a bit more bass to the guitar?
Keep the metronome going and don't speed up or slow down. That one bar of 12/8 would sound better.
Other than that, good tune.
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EZDrummer DFH samples are sampled from real kits. And I paid over $300 for the whole shabang, if anything is at fault, it's my inability to properly mix drums... Which I am working on.
Can't argue the palm muting, the culprit is my distortion, which I'm looking into tweaking as it's overall a little to muddy right now for the stuff I've been wanting to do lately.
There's no echo at all in the beginning, I'm picking every note.
Yeah... that pick slide bugs me too, it's on my "To fix list".
Again, working on tweaking my distortion to give it a little more clear cut sound.
Don't think I need to add bass to the guitar... I need to add a bass guitar to the song (Also on the to do list).
The entire section after 3:30 was recorded to a 12/8 metronome at 70 BPM, although I will admit one note is ever so slightly out of place, also on the "to fix list". And I may rework the drums for that section as I don't think the majority of them really compliment the 12/8 feel that well.
Thanks for the feedback, nice to get some real constructive criticism for a change! Glad you liked it!