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I said I'd do a song with vocals... Here's V.1!

Posted by Back-From-Purgatory - July 23rd, 2011

Well, I mentioned this a while ago, but I decided to do a song with vocals in it, and I procrastinated a bit on the idea... And today I finally sat down and did a bit of recording.

This will be my first full song with vocals in it up on NG... Well... first full song with vocals period (I'm talking original BTW, I'm not counting covers). So you could say this is my very first attempt at singing something that isn't by another band.

Anything else I'd wanna say about it I put in the author comments, changes and what-not that will be coming in the next version, that sort of stuff..
Take a listen and let me know what you think:

http://www.newgrounds.com/audio/listen /434917

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Marc2012 2011-07-26 07:13:19

New song Finally il try to give a Feedback once i have a contrect idea of it...

Marc2012 2011-07-26 19:09:58

So far the Guitar seem repetitive for a while : I don't feel any Great Solo but the atmosphere seem like a song of Mudwayne/Godsmack but without acoustic / or awesome guitar solo :

the song seem a bit Depressive or to express hatred with a punk guitar attitude instead of a heavy metal attitude

but it Version 1.0 who know what version 2.0 can be sometime it totally different : lot of Artist on newground after Tweaking the song for a month made the song twice better

but the rift that go at 1:30 - 1:55 make the song slightly better but right now it too dull for me to enjoy really but the lyric seem good so far but im not a lyric fan usually im more a instrument fan

i know it lack of drum / bass : I know you said it will be done soon : the lyrics : I don't actually seem to understand all of it yet : but so far listening it i find the song have potential but i'm not sure of how i could be a support to make it better

I don't hate the solo at the near ending part but should be better i hope you can improve that while i don't know how : I know how a guitar can sound as iv listen over 15,000 song featuring them but i don't know shit about how to play them

Back-From-Purgatory 2011-07-26 19:09:58

Oh believe me... The solo in it right now won't be there in the next version, I'll rather improve it, or remove it entirely... Because I'm not at all satisfied with what's in there right now. I think I only really left it in there as a placeholder to remind me of the general idea I was going for.

Marc2012 2011-07-27 18:26:43

That Good to Hear :) will look forward the upgrade of the song if it make it awesome

I said I'd do a song with vocals... Here's V.1!

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