I like it
Some good chops you got there, you've done me proud.
I like it
Some good chops you got there, you've done me proud.
Thanks :D it helps to have a good tune behind it :D
PS what do you mean by chops? we don't say that here in the UK
Potential
This has potential, but you really have to readjust that autotune, most of it is fine, but lower in the range, the autotune is horribly off-key, which ruined the whole song for me hearing 1 note every so often that was just like nails on a chalkboard.
Aside from that, it wasn't too bad. My only big complaint (Badly tuned autotune aside) is that it's much too simple in terms of progression, there is no real lift to the song. It sounds nice in the intro, but it never really progresses any further than the feel in the intro. Simply put, there's no real climax, the chorus really could have used a little more fleshing out, maybe adding a nice soft pad or an atmospheric texture to just pump up the emotional pull that is usually found in the chorus of songs.
My final tiny gripe is that the synth used in the chorus sounds like it was detuned just a tiny bit too much.
And critique aside, I'd suggest trying to do a track (Be it this one or another song) without autotune, you have a very soft voice, which is perfect for this type of "vocal trance". Don't rely on autotune too much, you'll never learn to sing better if you don't try without it.
Thanks for the review. I agree with pretty much everything there. I'll have to rework this song. As for my singing, I am practicing without Autotune, but at the moment it doesn't soundd very good so I haven't posted any songs without Autotune. I plan to when I'm able to hit the right pitches though. :)
Epic
I don't care what anyone else says. This is a work of art.
It sure is!
Nice
It is a little repetitive, however it does give off a good atmosphere, I could definitely see this as credits music for a horror game/movie. Loved the "wobbly" usage.
And on to the Schitzoid critique. Unfortunately, a tempo change (It slows down a tiny bit in the second half, yeah?) isn't a time signature change. The mood change is pretty subtle, but it is there, and I love the feeling of the second half.
Overall though, I quite enjoyed it, I'd love to see this used in a flash of some kind.
Ah, the time signature, right :/ I know what it is. Well, anyway glad you liked
Very nice
This has the best mood switch of the songs I've reviewed so far, by far. I loved the drumbeat, very upbeat, brought the rest of the music up from a more mellow feel to a sort of jazzy sound.
Loved the beach sounds as well. Really my only complaint is that the strings seem to wander just a little bit, but overall, was very well done. The short little piano melody at the end was a very nice touch as well.
sorry man for the time signature change... I wanted to expand it on my drum but It seems to stay in a weird 4/4. No worries, I've already done 3/4 in one of my songs ;).
Thanks!
Nice
Very nice composition, and aside from a slip up here and there, awesome playing. Sets a great mood, and honestly reminds me a lot of the back tracks a lot of the Final Fantasy games have, very soothing and has a sense of urgency or curiosity to it before a sudden realization.
That's how I see it anyways, either way, a very nice piece, kudos! My biggest complaint is the light static in the background, but really, it doesn't hinder the performance at all.
Keep it up.
Not bad
Not bad at all, although a tempo change doesn't really count as a time signature change, I'll let that go.
My biggest critique here is the song is rather simple. But aside from that, it does do a pretty good job changing the mood throughout, especially when contrasting the middle bit with the end.
The bass part throughout is pretty unique and gives off a different kind of vibe, which is a nice change from most peoples use of the common 4 note bass line.
Keep it up!
Ya, it was all I could come up with in 24 hours. If I get time next week I'll update it and relearn what a time sig is too :P Thanks for reviewing.
Epic
This is what all DnB should sound like if you ask me, very melodic, yet busy, upbeat, and very well processed.
Keep it up.
why thank you i think so as well
Epic
I don't write very many reviews, but this I just had to, aside from a couple muffled drums or leveling issue...
This was purely fucking epic. Thank you for giving my ears an orgasm.
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